Hi there, and welcome to SeeMoji. I’m the Chief Information Officer.
I need you to write an email to our investors. I’ll send you over the bullet points of what to include. Make sure you get everything from the bullets into your email. It’s really important that we convey all of that information clearly.
Special request: I need you to in a way that will increase buy-in. We have big changes coming up at SeeMoji, and we need the investors to be on board with them.
I’ll have my admin send over those bullet points.
Thanks, and good luck.
Hi there. I’m the Document and Media Specialist.
Here are the formatting requirements for your email. Keep your email to less than one page in length and use block style, single spaced. Margins should be one inch, and font should be 12-point Arial or similar. You must – I repeat, must – include a subject line. The handbook contains some model documents and other information that will be helpful to you. I’ll send you an email with the details.
Hey. I overheard all that. I overhear pretty much everything, actually.
Here’s a bit of advice. Those bullet points? You should probably reorder and reword them. And frankly, you might not even want to leave some of them as bullet points at all. I mean, if they thought their giant list of bullet points was going to work, you wouldn’t need to rewrite them. You get what I’m saying?
Also, be sure to reorder that information in a way that highlights what you think the investors will like and justifies what you think they might not like. Doubling the staff size has drawbacks, sure. But emphasizing the benefits of a larger staff can make those drawbacks seem not so bad.
Following are some additional guidelines for this assignment:
Writing an Effective Subject Line
Whether it be a memo or an email, a good subject line is going to make the difference between getting your message read or ignored. With emails especially, you have to assume that your reader or readers are swamped with dozens of other messages. Will yours stand out as important? Are your readers going to select yours to read immediately, or are they going to “park” it to read later?
You want to keep your subject line short and to the point, but you also want to include enough information that it gets attention and stands out. And, you will want to consider what is important to your readers. If there is a deadline or date by which action must be taken, you will also need to include that so people will know by when they must respond.
Most importantly, don’t try to trick your reader by making your subject line a “teaser.” (An example of a teaser would be something like “Exciting News Coming to SeeMoji!”) Newspaper sometimes do that, but it is not ethical, especially in business, and is likely to make your reader angry because you are wasting his time, and your actions may cause distrust in the future.
Here are some examples of subject lines that readers are likely to ignore:
And here are some examples that are more likely to get readers’ attention:
A good subject line will include ALL of the following:
We value our customers and so we ensure that what we do is 100% original..
With us you are guaranteed of quality work done by our qualified experts.Your information and everything that you do with us is kept completely confidential.
You have to be 100% sure of the quality of your product to give a money-back guarantee. This describes us perfectly. Make sure that this guarantee is totally transparent.Read more
The Product ordered is guaranteed to be original. Orders are checked by the most advanced anti-plagiarism software in the market to assure that the Product is 100% original. The Company has a zero tolerance policy for plagiarism.Read more
The Free Revision policy is a courtesy service that the Company provides to help ensure Customer’s total satisfaction with the completed Order. To receive free revision the Company requires that the Customer provide the request within fourteen (14) days from the first completion date and within a period of thirty (30) days for dissertations.Read more
The Company is committed to protect the privacy of the Customer and it will never resell or share any of Customer’s personal information, including credit card data, with any third party. All the online transactions are processed through the secure and reliable online payment systems.Read more
By placing an order with us, you agree to the service we provide. We will endear to do all that it takes to deliver a comprehensive paper as per your requirements. We also count on your cooperation to ensure that we deliver on this mandate.Read more